Kamis, 11 Februari 2010

It is about a girl called "Maris"

Hello guys! In this first post I'd like to tell you about myself, because I think it is the right term for me to tell you about myself. My name is Stella Maris Saraswati Mere, you can call me Maris. I was born in Semarang, May 7 1991. I'm the first-born child in my family. I have a cute sister named Priska. I also have a wise dad and a lovely mom. Now I live in Jogjakarta with my wonderful family.

What do I look like? Hmm, actually I like to describe myself as a cute girl, but unfortunately my physical appearance doesn't seem like a cute girl. I have an over weight body, but as you know I'm enough confiden
t with my body. I love my body. Beside an over weight body, I have a round face, tanned skin, wavy hair ( but I always make it in pony tail style), black eyes, pointed nose, and thick lips. Maybe now you can guess or describe what do I look like.. If you imagine that my face is same with Cinta Laura, I can say that you are the "cleverest" person in describing someone.(^_^)

Next, I want to tell you about my hobbies. I like singing very much. I like to sing in the bathroom when I'm taking a shower and in study room when I'm studying. Besides singing, I like watching movies, listening music, and reading. But now I rarely reading books, I prefer to read magazines and newspapers because I think they are more interesting to read.

In this first post I also want to tell you about my dreams. I have lots of dreams. First I want to be an English lecturer in my dad's hometown , Flores. I want to develop Flores students' ability in learning English. Second I want to go abroad. I want to go to Europe because I think Europe has a lot of great countries with their beautiful cities. Third, I want to continue my study in Cambridge University. Why I choose Cambridge? Because when I saw some pictures of Cambridge University I saw that the building is very great and amazing . Beside that, Cambridge University is a well-known university in the world. My dreams that I've mentioned above are also my reasons why I chose to study in PBI now.Last dream is about what kind of man I suppose to marry with. I have a dream that someday I can marry with a foreigner or we usually call it "bule". My purpose why I want to marry a foreigner is I want to have children who are better than me, neither in physical appearance or cleverness.

Last, I want to tell you about my feeling study in PBI. Study in PBI is very awesome and amazing. I can meet lots of friends who have many different characters. I am taught by great lecturers. The lessons are very interesting. But I must confess, in this second semester I feel so tired because I take 25 credit hours. Now I just hope even though I feel tired, I can do the best and give my best in this semester.

I think that's all about me. I'm sorry if there are any mistakes in what I've written about myself. But I hope, this introduction can make you more know about who I am . Thank you so much. Have a nice Paragraph Writing Lesson!!!

7 komentar:

  1. hmmm.... The craziest friend I've ever had...

    You really look like Cinta Laura!!! ( Am I the cleverest person in the world???)hehehehe

    don't give up to reach your dream..
    God bless you!

    BalasHapus
  2. wouwww. . .
    your dreams are so amazing..
    I proud of you, friend. . .
    Alright, do your best!!

    BalasHapus
  3. I thought you was born in Flores.hehehe.....
    I hope you can reach your dreams. good luck n_n

    BalasHapus
  4. mamamama...........
    okey..............
    what a cute girl you are!

    BalasHapus
  5. great.....
    hopefully, you'll get the best in your life sis..
    ^-^

    BalasHapus
  6. Maris....
    Perhaps it's too late to comment your posting, but I've just got something interesting from ur posting..

    Apparently u have the same dream with me, don't u?
    U said that u want to marry foreigner...

    Hm...I'm sure that when I did my hot seat in Speech 1, u smiled in ur heart because u meet the person who has the same dream with u hehehe...

    Btw, I also want to correct lil bit about ur writing.
    Look at the last two line of ur fourth paragraph.

    In my opinion, it should be "I want to have children who are better than me, EITHER physical appearance or cleverness."

    Thank u....

    BalasHapus
  7. thanks a lot for your comments my friends...I really hope that I can do better in the next writing tasks....
    @ tiara: Thank you so much Tiara...that's really help me to make a better paragraph thanks...

    BalasHapus